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Sometime during Season 10

"McGee's been looking at that thing for two hours."

Tony DiNozzo looked over at his fellow NCIS agent, Tim McGee, for the hundredth time since a mysterious laptop appeared on McGee's desk.

It had no plugs and a seemingly unlimited power supply. It wasn't connected to any of the wireless networks in the NCIS building or in the Navy Yard, yet it had a very unusual connection to one and only one website.

The laptop operated off an Intel chip and was loaded with Windows 8, with the fastest loading time
McGee had ever seen. Yet he could only access one website from it.

The initials stenciled onto the cover - N F A - were the same initials as the website the laptop was accessing from somewhere: NCIS Fanfiction Addiction Community.

McGee tried to access the site from his own work PC, his laptop, his smartphone and struck out each time; so, the agent stopped looking for it from NCIS computers and started looking through it with the laptop.

Two hours later, McGee had not said a word to anyone - even to DiNozzo, looking over his shoulder - but typed plenty of notes on what he found.

Most of those notes had been emailed to Director Leon Vance, who was making his way down the steps leading from his office to the third-floor bullpen where DiNozzo and McGee worked.

"Any more...revelations from that thing?" Vance asked McGee.

"Plenty more, sir," McGee replied.

"McSterious speaks," Tony interjected.

"DiNozzo. When can I expect agent Gibbs to arrive?" Vance said to Tony.

"He and Ziva are on their way back," Tony answered. "Should be back anytime--"

Right then, the third-floor elevator dinged, and moments later Tony and McGee's boss - Leroy Jethro Gibbs - and their fellow agent Ziva David strode out of it towards the bullpen.

"In a hurry, Leon?" Gibbs asked the director, as Ziva hurried over to look over McGee's other shoulder.

"This...laptop apparently has information on all of our case files, on us individually, and on most people we've encountered, alive and dead," Vance said sternly. "Information that is, and should be, classified."

Gibbs placed himself between Tony and Ziva, right behind McGee, and looked at the active topics page of the NFA Community NCIS Fanfiction Addiction Community website on the screen.

"What are we looking at, McGee?" Gibbs asked.

"That's the thing, boss," McGee replied. "I've tried tracing this website to known domestic government agencies; international agencies and governments; domestic and international civilian web hosts; basically, anything that could host a web page."

"And?" Gibbs asked.

"I can't trace it, at least through our computers and networks," McGee said.

"That does not make sense," Ziva said. "A website has to be hosted somewhere on the Internet, correct?"

"That's right," McGee said. "This site, however, is untraceable."

"No website is untraceable," Vance said. "You yourself have proven that before more than once. Find the source of this website, and find out why we can't access it--"

Vance was interrupted by Abby Sciuto, NCIS's top forensics specialist, who ran into the bullpen from the back elevator, carrying an identical laptop. It took was stenciled with N F A; had a limitless power supply; and could access only one website.

"Gibbs! Gibbs! Gibbs!..Leon! Tony! Ziva!...McGee!" Abby said, very loudly and in somewhat of a panic, before shoving her laptop's screen in McGee's face.

"Oh my gosh, oh my gosh...McGeeGibbsLeonTonyZivathiswebsiteisallaboutusand--"

"Abby!"

"Abs!"

"Ms Sciuto!"

"Abs! Get...get that screen outta my face!"

"...oh!...sorry, McGee."

Abby removed her laptop from McGee's face, and laid it on his desk.

"Sorry," she said, "but this thing...just appeared, out of nowhere, in my lab...only one website, with information about us, all of us, even some of us who, uh, aren't around anymore--"

"This laptop appeared in your lab, Abs?" Gibbs asked her.

"Yeah," she said.

"How long ago?" Vance said.

"Almost a couple hours?" Abby replied. "I was in my lab, went to get a sample, turned around, and it was there. I looked at it, tried to call McGee and Tony, then looked at it some more, and saw this website with information about us--"

"A similar incident happened to Mr. Palmer and I," interjected Dr. Donald "Ducky" Mallard, as his assistant - Jimmy Palmer - followed behind, carrying a third laptop.

"This particular laptop appeared, abruptly, next to one of our bodies in the morgue. Mr. Palmer nearly dropped a blood sample" - Ducky looked at Palmer - "in shock. I myself have to confess I would have done the same, had I not been sitting down. It is like something one might encounter in a film, or a science fiction novel, or a television program--"

"That's it!" McGee yelled. "That's what this is!"

"What what is, McGee?" Gibbs asked.

"This...website," McGee replied. "It's structured like a fan website for a television show."

"A...television show?" Ziva asked. "About whom?"

"About us."

"Uh...boss? Director?" Tony said, standing over his desk, looking at another laptop, stencilled N F A, then spotting similar laptops on Ziva and Gibbs' desks. "Looks like I got one of my own. And, so do you, Boss and you too, Ziva."

"Were those there a few minutes ago?" Vance asked Tony.

"No," Tony said.

Gibbs and Ziva went over to their respective desks, opened their laptops, and found the N F A website loaded on Chrome, set to the home page.

"McGee," Gibbs said. "Whatever you've found on that site, forward to me."

"On it boss."

"DiNozzo. Ziva. Investigate it. Abby, Ducky, Palmer, find a chair, pull up to one of our desks. You investigate, too."

"What are we looking for, Boss?" Tony asked.

"Anything and everything," Gibbs said. "Starting with what this thing presents itself as and what it might actually be. And, who might be involved with it."

No one had gotten up except for restroom breaks, and even Director Vance had found a laptop waiting on his office desk. By midnight, Team Gibbs - and Vance - finally had a sense of what the website is, if not whom was behind it and where it came from.

"This is a...fan...website for a television show," Ziva stated. "A television show about...us."

"Wrap your head around that," Tony said. "Like Deep Six, come to life."

"This isn't Deep Six, Tony," McGee said, annoyed at the reference to his brief writing career. "This is us. As if we were fictional characters."

"Thank goodness for that, McGregor," Palmer replied. "None of these people referred to me as a necrophiliac, unlike you."

"Mr. Palmer," Ducky interrupted. "I'm certain Timothy regrets that and many other things about his sojourn into fiction; be it as it may, we have far greater concerns."

"Some of this is clearly fiction," Ziva said. "Fan fiction. About us--"

"Some of it straightforward, case-type stuff," McGee said. "Most of it...more personal."

"Personal?" Gibbs said.

"Interpersonal relationships," Ducky replied. "Some of it of a quite...intimate nature."

"Hinky," Abby added.

"What kind of nature?" Gibbs said.

"Uh...some of it looks like friendship type stories," Abby said. "McGee and Tony, for example. Some of it's case files. Most of it is romantic...some of it sweet, and some of it...ah--"

"Of a sexual nature," Vance said, as he walked past Tony and ZIva's desks.

"Just like the Gemcity fanfic," Tony said, rather uncomfortably.

"MacTommy?" Ziva replied, before laughing. "I remember reading those stories."

"Uh....try McNozzo." Abby.

"McWHO?" Tony and McGee shouted in unison.

"And 'McGiva', and 'McAbby', and 'McGibbs', and 'Tibbs'," Palmer said, grinning like a 12-year-old kid, before realizing that everyone else wasn't as humored by the pairings as he was.

Abby realized a couple of other pairings, too, as her demeanor turned sullen.

"Tate," she said, "and Kibbs."

"Who are they?" ZIva asked.

"Tony, and Kate," Abby replied. "And Kate and Gibbs....ohmigod, Gibbs, there's stories about Kate, and threads, and subforums about her, with her picture, and discussing her, and stories about her--"

"And everyone else," McGee interrupted. "Even Jenny."

"So what we are looking at is, in essence, a fan website dedicated to fictional stories and discussion of characters from a TV show about us," Vance stated. "Not a reality show. A crime procedural show, like Criminal Minds."

"That...that's what it looks like, to me," McGee replied, and everyone else nodded their assent.

"Has anyone found the 'NCIS:LA' subforum?" Tony asked.

"'NCIS, L.A.'?" Gibbs replied.

"Whoever's behind this, also has info on the Office of Special Projects in Los Angeles, and some of the personnel there," Vance stated. "Classified information."

"Let me guess," Tony interjected. "OSP has its own TV drama, too."

Gibbs turned to McGee. "Tim, we have to find out who's behind this, and where this is coming from," Gibbs said. "Any idea who they might be?"

"No real names per se," McGee said. "Usernames, pseudonyms, like sondheimmcgeek; flootzavut; K9Lasko; Sergeant Conley; smackalicious; and Kagome."

"Jethro," Ducky said, "my cursory reading of the various subforums and threads indicates these appear to be ordinary people, fans of this...television show, not necessarily agents nor military nor government--"

"'Fans' with information about all of us," Gibbs said.

The elevator dinged, getting everyone's attention; who possibly would be coming there after midnight?

An elevator packed full of men and women, apparently returned from the afterlife.

"Jethro!"

Someone who looked and sounded like Jenny Shepard - in good health, and dressed like she was when Tony and Ziva left her in Los Angeles - yelled at Gibbs.

She was seconded by Kate Todd - holding a laptop, dressed like she was when she died in Norfolk - and Mike Franks; they were trailed by Paula Cassidy; Brent Langer; Michael Rivkin; Lara Macy;

And Eli David.

"This gets better and better," Vance said, with a hint of sarcasm.

"Speak for yourself, Director," Ziva replied, as 'Eli' made eye contact with her.

'Kate', surprisingly, put her laptop down on Tony's desk and hugged him tight, before letting go to hug Gibbs, and then Abby.

'Franks' walked over to Gibbs. "Probie," he said, "I hope your team's made more sense out of this than we have."

"Mike, I'm wondering if I'm seeing things," Gibbs replied.

"If you are, Probie, then everyone else in the room is too," 'Franks' answered.

Gibbs' phone rang.

"Jethro?"

"Hetty?"

"Jethro? Is Director Vance there?"

"Yes he is, Hetty."

"I'll take it," Leon said, talking to OSP manager Hetty Lange at Tony's desk, while Kate looked on, trying to profile everyone.

"I grew up, Kate," was all Tony could think to say.

"I read the forums, Tony," she said. "I'm proud of you."

Gibbs' phone rang, again.

It was FBI agent Tobias Fornell on the other line.

"Gibbs," he said. "We have a breach."

"What kind of breach," Gibbs asked, though he guessed it had something to do with a duplicate laptop.

"A laptop loaded with classified information," Fornell said, "on you and your team. And others. Including me, and Diane."

"Diane?" Gibbs said, his sense of foreboding growing stronger.

"Gibbs," Fornell said. "Diane got her hands on one of those things, too. She's with me in my car, demanding answers."

"I'm looking for answers myself, Tobias."

"Maybe 'dewgoddess' or 'musicnotes093' has them," Fornell said. "I'm bringing Diane over--"

"Not necessary, Tobias," Gibbs said, hoping Fornell would turn the car around and go back to the FBI building in Quantico.

"No choice," Fornell replied. "I can't suffer alone."

Fornell hung up.

"That was Tobias Fornell," Gibbs told Leon - and everyone else. "He has a laptop. And, so does Diane."

"And that was Hetty Lange in Los Angeles," Leon replied. "Three of her deceased agents showed up with laptops, that also appeared on her and her agents' desks. Not nearly as much intel on them as on us, but enough to have her - and me - concerned."

Leon spied Eli David and had a thought.

"I'm putting a BOLO out on Ari Haswari, Kyle Boone, Paloma Reynosa and Jonas Cobb and every other dead criminal known to us in the past," Leon said, as he excused himself to Paula Cassidy, making his way past her to the stairs. "Ari, Cobb and Boone are at the top of the list. I'm calling Mossad--"

"That will not be necessary," 'Eli' said. "I have already done so--"

"I'm calling Mossad," Leon said. "And SecNav. Agents David and DiNozzo, keep Director David and Agent Rivkin under surveillance. Gibbs, wake up Dorneget; tell him to get here ASAP. Ms. Shepard, I'm Director. McGee; find out the source of this thing. Abby, Ducky, DNA tests and physicals on our 'resurrected' friends."

Leon urgently ran up the stairs, to his office.

"You heard the Director," Gibbs said. "No offense...Jenny."

"None taken," 'Jenny' replied, before running up their stairs.

"Where are you going?" Gibbs yelled.

"Vance needs a BOLO out on La Grenouille!" she yelled back.

Moments later, the familiar ding of the elevator sounded, and the first wave of living people piled off: Stan Burley, Faith Coleman, Abigail Borin, Tom Morrow, Gerald Jackson, Nikki Jardine.

Vivian Blackadder, who hadn't been seen since before Gibbs hired Kate.

And Jeanne Benoit, who made a beeline for DiNozzo, only to be cut off by 'Kate'.

A minute later, Fornell and Diane led Sam Ryan, Jordan Hampton, Margaret Hart and Hollis Mann into the crowded area.

Gibbs yelled at the top of his lungs, to break up Kate and Jeanne; Rivkin and Tony; ZIva and Eli; and Diane and everyone.

"ENOUGH!" he screamed, and it was enough to quiet down the mob.

"Those of you we know to be dead, line up, follow Abby down to her lab and then Ducky down to the morgue--"

"No pun intended," Tony said.

Gibbs ran over and gave his senior agent a headslap.

"Those of you who we know to be alive," Gibbs said, slightly less loudly, "you will help in our investigation of this...phenomenon. Stan; head down with the group going with Abby, Ducky and Palmer to keep an eye on things. Ziva, you're with them, too.

"DiNozzo and Jardine; you're up here. Help McGee; Kate, MIke, help Tony. Tom, Tobias, with me, up to the Director's office."

"What about ME?" Diane Sterling yelled. "Did you see what they said about me--"

"Dr. Hampton." Gibbs said, motioning for her to come over, even as Diane yelled on and on, to Fornell's embarassment.

"Gibbs? What's going on--"

"Please tell me you have a sedative."

"Why would I....OH," she replied, as Borin and Jardine tried in vain to calm down Diane. "Let me look in my purse..."

"If you don't, get one from Ducky," Gibbs told her. "And administer it to Diane Sterling, ASAP."

"When I return, I will give the rest of you your assignments," Gibbs said to the rest of the crowd. "In the meantime, stay calm, and do not get in the way of those who are working."

Gibbs led Morrow and Fornell up the stairs, to talk with Leon, Jenny and who or whatever else might be in Vance's office.

"You're leaving my - our - ex-wife alone with...McGee?" was all Fornell could think to say.

And, for the first and perhaps only time in his life, he was the recipient of a Gibbs headslap.

Morrow said nothing, but wondered to himself which subforum McDiane could be found on.

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:lol2: Love it! Great bringing back the other characters, including the dead ones! And that last line was perfect!

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Ziva's remark about MacTommy and Tim and Tony's reaction to McNozzo was hilarious.

I loved that you included NCIS:LA, the other characters, and of course, Fornell. Brilliant. :clap:

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This is brilliant! Everyone is here, just like in fandom! The dead, the living, the where did they go to characters, all here! I loved it. ;D Is Jackie coming back?

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Thank you all for your kind words.

For those who weren't mentioned...suffice it to say, Team Gibbs and Co. know all about you :evillaugh:

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This is brilliant! Everyone is here, just like in fandom! The dead, the living, the where did they go to characters, all here! I loved it. ;D Is Jackie coming back?


Not to turn this into an epic...but:

1. Jackie is at home, having called Leon's phone multiple times

2. Someone - someones - are waiting for Gibbs in his living room. And Gibbs just beats Dorneget and a team of NCIS agents there to meet them. Still...if Vance has to go back to work, despite Jackie, so does Gibbs...despite them.

3. Ari has a bullet waiting for him...even Eli sees how bad the guy is. But it'll be Ziva...or G Callen...who fires the gun.

4. Paloma, Cobb, Boone and the other supervillains from the NCIS universe get caught before they can kill or hurt anyone

5. Diane Sterling does not like to be sedated :lol2:

6. Gibbs and Vance end up having to ban searches for 'ships' on the website ;D

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Oh, Doc Cranston, E.J., Breana and Michelle Lee are around too. Doc and Kate are crying in Abby's lab.

Admiral McGee snuck in. Jethro the Dog, Sarah McGee, Jackson Gibbs, DiNozzo Senior. It's an NCIS extended family reunion, I tell ya. All looking for themselves on their laptops.

Victoria Mallard appeared to everyone's shock, and promptly asked Diane to show her knickers. Fortunately, Diane is sleeping off the sedative :evillaugh:

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"Not necessary, Tobias," Gibbs said, hoping Fornell would turn the car around and go back to the FBI building in Quantico.

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And, for the first and perhaps only time in his life, he was the recipient of a Gibbs headslap.

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Wildly fascinating! At first, I thought it would be predictable. The team stumbles onto their alter egos, but then you really revved up the action with characters from the past- not just the good but the bad. The sense of urgency, pulling everyone together in teams, Jenny and Vance both the directors- it really came to life, so to speak. :clap: :clap: :clap:

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"I read the forums, Tony," she said. "I'm proud of you."


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Awwwww, adored the Tony and Kate moment. Freshly back from the dead, and he's the first one she hugs. :smitten:

Jethro the dog pees on everybody's shoes for forgetting him after one episode.

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Love it. Very comprehensive. I like that you included everyone, not just the current cast. Well done.

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Love it. Very comprehensive. I like that you included everyone, not just the current cast. Well done.


Keys, thanks! :)

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