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PostPosted: Sun Jun 22, 2014 11:17 pm 
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 23, 2014 10:41 am 
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Great start! It felt just like the start of an episode - fast paced and good dialogue, plus a nice mystery to boot!

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Wow! What a start! You create the atmosphere so well, and the story is already so interesting. I look forward to seeing where it goes from here!

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 24, 2014 7:43 am 
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Thanks, y'all ;D

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 26, 2014 4:25 pm 
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Chapter 2 is up, and you get your first look at Bardo, IA :evillaugh:

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2014 5:58 pm 
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I'm creeped out by this place and can't wait to find out what the 'problem' is...great story!

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2014 10:24 pm 
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Thanks! If you think it's creepy during the day, well, wait until nightfall :evillaugh:

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 27, 2014 11:27 pm 
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:jumpgreen: I'll have to make sure I only read it during daylight!

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 29, 2014 6:53 pm 
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Chapter 3 is up. Last chapter will be posted tomorrow.

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Really enjoying this. It definitely sounds like a spooky place and I did get the Field of Dreams episode. Totally can't wait to see what happens next. Reads like an actual episode. Also in the words of Gibbs. "I don't believe in coincidence." I loved how you had the population reading as 87 as in the Australia's Devil Number. You're doing a great job with the prompt for sure.

Glad you chose that prompt to work on.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 30, 2014 9:58 am 
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Thanks! I'm glad to hear you're enjoying it. Also happy to hear it reads like an episode, since I was going for that :yes:

I knew I wanted to use the devil's number from the other prompt, and that seemed like a good way to use it ;D

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Of course you'd leave off there ;D Something's rotten in Denmark, and if I know you there's something supernatural involved. Loving the descriptions of the ghost town, especially from Tony's perspective. Can't wait to see what happens.

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PostPosted: Mon Jun 30, 2014 9:36 pm 
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Thanks! Most questions will be resolved in the final chapter ;)

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2014 1:32 am 
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And the final chapter is up! I had until midnight Pacific time, right? :lol2:

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2014 3:39 am 
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An excellent finish to an intriguing story. I loved the very last part as well. Just leaving it wide open in for a sequel as a good ghost story does. Well done and a great read :clap: :clap:

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2014 7:04 am 
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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it ;D It was a fun prompt to work with. :evillaugh:

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2014 2:36 pm 
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Very well done! Love the supernatural elements of it :evillaugh: Very spooky!

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 01, 2014 10:23 pm 
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Nice and spooky and weird. I always like how you set up the history of a place. I can imagine a flat place among the cornfields, an abandoned prison and cemetery. You did a great job of setting it up. Not quite sure what took Tim out. I guess we'll never know or the spooky visitors. Great job! :clap: :clap: :clap:

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 02, 2014 8:47 am 
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Thanks! As for what took Tim out, well, maybe the older locals were right :evillaugh:

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I loved this story, and this is a different genre from what I normally read. It read like an episode (which is a good thing, IMO), and was an enjoyable read. You have piqued my curiosity as to what those...things...were. Ghosts? Demons? Perhaps that's part of the mystery...

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 03, 2014 9:40 pm 
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Thanks! It's always nice to hear that people read my stories especially when they don't usually read the genre. As for what the things were, yes, that is part of the mystery ;D Perhaps all of the above, and then some :evillaugh:

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:dance: :clap: loved it Lia, it got me, it enveloped me, and as it wasn't as long as you usually do ( :hug2col: ) I was hooked and managed to read it all thro. I knew you could do good with that prompt better than I could so I really congratulate you

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 04, 2014 12:29 pm 
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Thanks, Pat! I knew I didn't want to do a long fic this year, but I hope this was the right length ;D

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Thanks, Pat! I knew I didn't want to do a long fic this year, but I hope this was the right length ;D

oh it was, and I'm waiting to get the go ahead from you to let me write what I was going to write

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AS far as I'm concerned you can go right ahead and write it. Might want to ask Taylor, though. I doubt he'd mind.

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AS far as I'm concerned you can go right ahead and write it. Might want to ask Taylor, though. I doubt he'd mind.

Okay Dokey

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Yeah you know I do.

Then Taylor wait, and Lia thank you for letting me do mine, but mine is more political as per usual.

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No problem. I always like the historical aspect in your fics ;D

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No problem. I always like the historical aspect in your fics ;D

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I just started reading this Lia - may not finish it tonight - and I have to agree with others that that cold open feels very NCIS ish! I'm not very good at that :-/ :rolleyes: I'm jealous!

Also loved the Gibbs/DiNozzo banter about Bishop: I think being ragged on (even in her absence) is a sign of acceptance, and I also conversely like that Gibbs has her back when she's not around to protest.

Anyway, onwards, but the Tibbsish banter made me chuckle and I had to let you know :)

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Glad you like it so far. Writing team banter is always fun ;D

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I think reading and writing team banter is maybe the most fun I have with NCIS fic. Just ridiculously enjoyable ;D

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