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PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 12:44 pm 
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I really liked that Tim accepted the position at the end. It felt right and logical for him to move up into that role. Great story! :clap:

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2015 12:47 pm 
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A satisfying ending to a great story though I have to wonder based on the comment at the end about prying Abby off of him if the 20-minute hug was meant to be between Tim and Abby though it sounded like it was between Tim and Tony. That was the only thing in the entire story that seemed 'off' but otherwise, a fantastic, very enjoyable story and well worth the wait. :)

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 17, 2015 12:28 am 
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Thank you all for the wonderful comments! I was really worried that this story was going to suck, and I was going to ruin it at the end. I'm so glad everyone liked it! I feel like I'm pretty happy with the way it ended.

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Thank you all for the wonderful comments! I was really worried that this story was going to suck, and I was going to ruin it at the end. I'm so glad everyone liked it! I feel like I'm pretty happy with the way it ended.

Thing is if you're happy that's the main thing, it was great

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 17, 2015 10:07 am 
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I really enjoyed this one! You had lots of action, intrigue, good Tim whump and Papa!Gibbs, excellent original characters, a deeply satisfying conclusion...in short, a cracking read, thank you!

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 17, 2015 10:46 pm 
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Thanks, Mad!

I realized today as I was re-reading that I kind of forgot about Cloud at the end... let's just say he got away again... I'm sure Tim will catch him. ;)

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