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Love the start!!! :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

I would like to see that look on Gibbs' face.

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Can't wait for more!! :bribe:

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Working on it. I decided to change the order of some things in the fic. It should be about 4 chapters.

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This is getting good! Not that it wasn't, but you know, the suspense in building.

I don't trust Hoffman. He's in on it. :yes: Maybe not, but I suspect him. If not him, someone's feeding Carter information. Clearly.

I can't wait for Tim to tell Gibbs the truth. :shocked:

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Damn it, not again...

I really shouldn't have laughed as hard at that as I did...

Very enjoyable ramping up to tension, Lia! Gibbs' internal monologues were very on point and very him, and I laughed aloud when the nurse told him McGee was as stubborn as him and it made him proud. YES, so much truth :rofl: :lol2:

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iheartGibbs wrote:
This is getting good! Not that it wasn't, but you know, the suspense in building.


Thanks! ;D

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I don't trust Hoffman. He's in on it. :yes: Maybe not, but I suspect him. If not him, someone's feeding Carter information. Clearly.


You'll see what his role in all this is in the next chapter :yes:

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I can't wait for Tim to tell Gibbs the truth. :shocked:


Final chapter ;D But let's just say there's another surprise coming up soon 8-)

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Damn it, not again...

I really shouldn't have laughed as hard at that as I did...


I was trying to add a bit of dark humor in there, so I'm glad you did laugh :lol2:

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Very enjoyable ramping up to tension, Lia! Gibbs' internal monologues were very on point and very him, and I laughed aloud when the nurse told him McGee was as stubborn as him and it made him proud. YES, so much truth :rofl: :lol2:


Gibbs POV is not easy for me to write, so I'm glad it's in character. And yes, I do think Gibbs would be proud of his 'kids' taking after him ;D

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I wouldn't have known you were finding it hard - the effort doesn't show, and I mean that in a good way! Grouchy and grumbly, concerned but unwilling to show it? Yup, that's our Gibbs :smitten: :rofl:

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He's downright snarky in the next chapter. I hope it works :lol2:

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I'm sure it will. :yes:

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:smitten: I love snarky Gibbs! I'm sure it'll be great ;D

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He has good reason to be snarky ;D

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Excellent. Though to be honest, I like snarky Gibbs even when he doesn't have a good reason for it :blush: I'm fairly easy to please in that regard :evillaugh:

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Chapter 3 is up, with one more to go. Sorry it's late, but I've been busy painting (walls, not portraits).

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My cat says, "``````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````````" because she's lying on my desk with her head on my keyboard. :brood:

Now that I have her moved so I can actually type without her assistance...

This is fabulous. I love how they got away. I can't wait to hear Tim's explanation to Gibbs.

Thanks so much for such a great story. This is right up my alley. :yes:

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You're welcome ;D I'm glad you like it.

Tim will be giving his explanation in the final chapter, and I get to (science) geek out, just a little :lol2:

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Hahaha give your cat a tickle from me, Barb!
:sigh: now I really WAS looking forward to Gibbs doing a sit-rep in his skivvies :sigh: is that wrong of me?? :evillaugh:
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I want a Gibbs-sitrep-in-skivvies scene, too! *pouts*

But this is still pretty fabulous, despite that.

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Well, you had a "Gibbs in skivvies snarking with the bad guy scene." I hope that makes up for it a little :lol2:

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That was pretty good, I admit ;D :smitten: :rofl: what can I say? I have a problem...

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Gibbs' second "Damn it, not again" had me LOLing. Love the way Tim's secret is coming out, love the poetic justic (pun intended) for the bad guy and really interested to see how this discussion with Gibbs and Tim goes.

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Thanks! Gibbs is having a rough time in this one. He's going to need a vacation or something ;)

I've written the ending scene (had to get that out of my head before it got too convoluted), but I need to write the middle part of the last chapter. After I finish cleaning out my work spaces. :banghead:

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This is so great, Lia!! I can't wait to see the explanation. I am loving Gibbs' support, though, even before he knows what is going on.

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Thanks! The explanation is in the final chapter (the part I haven't written yet :banghead:) One thing Gibbs knows is that no matter what, Tim is still a good person and deserves to have his side told, at least.

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All done! I hope the ending works ;D

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:yesyes: made it so read all way through and I really enjoyed I wasn't expecting the end like that but it would explain Tim's love of the Scouts and his tracking. Good to see you didn't kill Gibbs.

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I hadn't thought about his connection to the Scouts, Pat. You're right. :yes: That makes even more sense.

I loved this story SO MUCH!!! :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce: :bounce:

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Lia, thank you again for writing this.

I especially loved the final chapter. You did a great job explaining it. Gibbs is so good at knowing how to set someone at ease...when he wants to! ;)

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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, Barb!

Now Pat, why would I kill Gibbs? I only did that once and I brought him back anyway :lol2:

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I loved that you came up with a scientific explanation for how Tim used his powers - it does make sense that having a superpower and a scientific mindset, it would be entirely logical that he would experiment and theorise about what/how/why his power worked :yes:

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Thanks! It seemed like something he would do, even if he still hasn't figured out the "why" part.

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:flirtysmile: Wow, I loved your take on the prompt! Nice to see a Gibbs and McGee friendship fic. It had some nice action too (and great Gibbs one-liners). Very enjoyable!

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Thanks! I haven't written to much with just the two of them, so it was a challenge. I'm glad to see it worked ;D

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This was a really good story, carefully crafted and surprisingly realistic despite the supernatural aspects. I absolutely loved the scientific plausibility you gave Tim's abilities and Tim's loyalty to his boss that he would break a promise to his mother to save his life.

I also found it hard to believe you had a difficult time writing Gibbs because it felt perfectly in character to me and the introspection was brilliant.

I'm not actually a huge fan of supernatural 'stuff' mixed with NCIS stuff on the whole but when a story is well-written like this and the other one in this 'verse, well, always willing to make an exception. Great story-telling. I hope you plan to write more in this 'verse because I can't wait to read it.

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Thank you! It's always great to hear that someone who doesn't usually read supernatural stories will read mine ;D

I might write more in this 'verse, but it will have to wait until I get some other stuff done. I'm in the process of moving (left Iowa later than I wanted, made it past Indianapolis and decided I've had enough driving for one day, so on to Ohio tomorrow). Then I have to find a new place to live near my new job.

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Thank you! It's always great to hear that someone who doesn't usually read supernatural stories will read mine ;D

I might write more in this 'verse, but it will have to wait until I get some other stuff done. I'm in the process of moving (left Iowa later than I wanted, made it past Indianapolis and decided I've had enough driving for one day, so on to Ohio tomorrow). Then I have to find a new place to live near my new job.

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Fantastic finish to your story, Lia. I agree with what others have said about loving the scientific explanations for his gift, and it makes perfect sense that Tim would try to understand it as much as possible. I understand his hesitance to tell people, and it was wonderful how Gibbs took time to process the information, but ultimately knew all along he'd accept Tim as he was. I do hope Delilah would feel the same way.

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Thanks! I had fun getting my geek on ;D

I think Delilah would accept him, but he's had such bad luck with women that I can imagine he'd be very hesitant to share with her initially. I also think he'd tell her eventually.

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A terrific AU story! I liked how you showed Tim’s doubts about his heritage and that it was to Gibbs he turned when he sought advice. Their conversations throughout were very good, you depict them so well, there was a realistic feel to what they had to say even when they were discussing Tim’s powers. You managed to have humour, drama, emotion and true camaraderie, all concluding with a fantastic scene at the lake, I always knew Tim was super, and now you’ve proved it! ;D :clap:

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Thanks! Tim didn't really have a choice to go to Gibbs, but I think he would have anyway. It was a challenge to keep things as 'realistic' as possible ;D

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I finally found time to read this. It's a great story. Your details are amazing. I love the McGibbs vibe- friendship, of course. I was waiting for a haunted element, but realized it was superpower when they kept miraculously getting saved. It was done well. Gibbs can handle information like that, and I like how you ended it. You really put meticulous attention into characterizations and it shows. Bravo!!! :clap: :clap: :clap: :clap:

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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it ;D

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Death by icicle! Awesome. I felt bad for the two DEA agents, though. Loved the Heisenberg references, and Gibbs being "nice." :nice: And Tony being there for the Timmy and trying to prod him back to normalcy. Great story, Lia! :clap:

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Death by icicle! Awesome. I felt bad for the two DEA agents, though. Loved the Heisenberg references, and Gibbs being "nice." :nice: And Tony being there for the Timmy and trying to prod him back to normalcy. Great story, Lia! :clap:


Thanks! Yeah, the DEA agents got the short end of the stick in this one...

Tony worries about his probie. He just can't help it :yes:

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