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PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 6:54 pm 
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Title: It should have been me
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Summary: It was never meant to happen, yet it did.

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I don't think that was meant to happen. Not like that. Looking back at that that day, I'm positive that that was never meant to happen, but yet it did. It was like fate had decided to take the day off just to see what would happen, and that cost us our boss.

I should have been the one to die. I know that I am the one who should have died. If he had let me go like I said I would, he would have been alive now. He would be alive and I would have been dead, like I'm supposed to be. He wasn't even killed in the line of duty. He was killed by a fucking truck driven by a reckless, drunk driver. The truck that had been meant for me.

Ducky told us afterwards that he had died instantly, like that would change anything. Abby is a mess. Nothing and no one can console her. The others are looking to me for guidance. I am the leader now. I am supposed to know what to do. What to say. How to act.

I can't. It was one thing when he left for Mexico because then we knew that he was still alive. Now it's different. Now he won't come back. But I have no choice. I can't leave them. He wouldn't have wanted me to leave them just like that. But he was the one who was supposed to lead them on.

I was never meant to happen like that.

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Comments are welcome.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:14 pm 
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Oh, that's sad. Nicely done though, keeping things vague but still emotional.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:18 pm 
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Thanks. I wasn't sure first if I was going to like it, but it screamed at me to be written, so I just let the words come.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:29 pm 
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Sometimes the most powerful stories are the ones we didn't want to write.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 7:45 pm 
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Very nice, Sanna, though so sad. :'( Well done.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2009 8:47 pm 
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I echo the others, that was very sad. :( But very well written, short but good. A great start to the WWC. :)

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PostPosted: Sat Jan 03, 2009 7:31 am 
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Thanks, guys :grouphug:

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 1:46 pm 
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Beautiful, but sad :'(

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 05, 2009 6:34 pm 
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Thanks, Colleen.

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Aww. Gibbs. :(

You know, I can see Tony contemplating the notion of leaving; but deciding against it. Particularly in this circumstance. Well done.

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Thanks! ;D

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