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PostPosted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 5:00 am 
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Title: Did you lock the door?
Pairing: Tony/Abby
Rating: FR-7
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Summary: Did Tony really lock the door, or did he forget?

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“Tony, did you remember to lock the door?”

Tony opened his mouth to answer, but then he hesitated and wrinkled his brow. Had he locked the door? He was sure he must have. Locking the door was something he did automatically, but he couldn't really recall doing it. But that didn't mean that he hadn't done it. Right?

“Um, yeah, sure I did”, he said without much conviction and kept his eyes on the road, not wanting to meet Abby's eyes right now.

“Tony! Didn't you check?”

“Of course I did. I know I did.”

“But you're not sure?”

“Well, um... I'm not 100, but...”

“Tony, we have to turn back and check!”

“Abby, we're almost at work. We'll be late if we turn around now.”

“Do you want someone to barge in and steal all of our things?”

“Of course I don't, but...”

“So turn around!”

Tony looked over at Abby and saw by the look she gave him that she'd already made up her mind and there was no chance in Hell he'd be able to get out of this.

“Yes, dear”, he said with a sigh, but winced when Abby suddenly gave him a hard punch to the shoulder. “Ow! What did you do that for?”

“You know why”, Abby replied and gave him a dark glare. “Now shut up and drive.”

Tony opened his mouth to retort but thought better of it and turned the car around, hoping that it turned out that he had locked the door, and that Gibbs would buy his excuse to why they were late. Maybe he could come up with a good lie?

The End

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 11:50 am 
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I like this! I like the way that you are vague about Tony & Abby's relationship...married? Cohabitating? Platonic roommates? It doesn't really matter, and that's one of the strengths. Obviously they've grown to know each other better, and to respond to each other better. They can almost read each other's minds.

Nicely done! :)

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 07, 2009 12:06 pm 
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I like that, too...even if Tim wasn't in it. ;D I can occasionally enjoy stories in which Tim is not featured...occasionally. ;D They're either an old married couple or friends or...a lot of things. That they know each other well is obvious. Nice.

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PostPosted: Sun Mar 08, 2009 6:22 am 
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Thanks guys! :happy-jumpgreen:

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 01, 2009 3:22 pm 
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Haha. I could so see this playing out in my head... "Yes, dear." :rofl:

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 04, 2009 9:06 am 
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;D Glad you liked it.

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