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It's an intriguing beginning, but I have to admit that I'm surprised they would assume Jimmy had anything to do with it. It seems like a leap, even for them. I'll be interested to find out why.

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Hmmm...I don't know; maybe you're right. I'll have to think about that...

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Okay; I think I'll scarp this and start over. Sorry about that!

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Oh, no! Don't scrap it because of my comments! I wasn't trying to say that it was bad! :no:

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Pam! There's nothing wrong with this!

Jimmy's always had a dark sense of humor - maybe it's implanted a seed of suspicion in some of them.

Maybe his friend left something suspcious laying around and it had Jimmy's name on it. I assumed when reading this that they had something that made them believe Jimmy really did know something more than he does.

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Okay, this is chapter 1, attempt number 2. I think (and hope) it's better. :)

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Okay, I'll admit, this flows better! I'm definitely intrigued as to what Fornell is up to and what's on Gibbs' desktop!

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Excellent. I just noticed the reference to Jimmy finagling his way into the secret agent conference. I loved that story. ;D I like!

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You'll find out... ;) Fornell was one of the characters who Nat requested for this. I like teaming him up with Jimmy. I think Fornell "gets" Jimmy, on a level that others don't.

I'm glad the rewrite works better!

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Ha! You remembered it, Teri! ;D I liked that story, too. I will add the next story in that series, of Jimmy going to FLETC...well, soon, I hope. :)

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Well, I never saw attempt 1, but I like this a lot, and I love how you write Jimmy. Visiting the Other Side is such a wonderful story....and this looks as if it’s going to be another goody!! :D

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Thanks, Mad! This one won't be as light-hearted as Visiting the Other Side was...but there will still be some light moments because, well, Jimmy is Jimmy. :D I do enjoy writing him. I identify with him, in some ways.

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I posted in the wrong forum.....AGAIN! Please delete my comments in your story, Pam. I'm so sorry about that. I MEANT to put this here:

I love Jimmy's thought processes: "the Amazing Gibbs & Co." and "Wait a minute, brain! I’m confused. Which side are you arguing now?" and my favorite: "Down, adrenaline! Down!" -- those all sound so very Jimmy. I'm very curious as to what Gibbs has in the file on his laptop. Ziva's virus: fiction imitates life, yes?

Wonderful beginning, Pam. Can't wait to read more!

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Great start! I like how it ties in to your previous Jimmy story too! Hopefully they find Ellery before anything happens to him :-/

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:blush: You know, I had to look up "Compass Rose, Navy Memorial" to see what was so special that Jimmy and Ellery would visit and that you would name this story after it? I guess I don't get off of the farm much. I learned some new things, and I'm intrigued with part of the inscription: "IN GRATITUDE TO THOSE NOW SERVING." Did you choose the title partially because of that? Because I was thinking it was a perfect description for Jimmy as well as Ellery--Jimmy serving still in the only way the Navy will allow (due to his health problems) at NCIS.

I loved the part with Jimmy describing his friendship with Ellery and Fornell's encounter with Jimmy. Why is he nosing around the Navy Memorial anyway? :thinking: I have a lot to think about before the next chapter.

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I love this, Pam! :flirtysmile: Thank you so much.

I love the relationship between Jimmy and his high school friend Ellery . . . you made me care about Ellery even though he doesn't get to speak for himself, and that's hard to do. And I had never considered that Jimmy's diabetes would have kept him out of the armed forces. That adds a wonderful depth to his character--of him wanting to serve and being denied. It throws his conversations with Gibbs and Ducky in "About Face" into an interesting light, too . . . about whether he has it in him to be a hero. (Of course you do, Jimmy!) You can see where that would be a sensitive subject if he had wanted to join the Navy and been refused for health reasons.

Thanks for working in a Washington landmark, too. I love what you're doing with this!

I'm a little late getting here because I wasn't online last night. This is a great way to start Monday.

Thank you!

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Thanks, Shellie! Posting in the wrong place has happened to us all at one time or another, so don't worry too much about it. Sharp-eyed people who were on a few hours ago when I posted a reply to you might have seen that I also replied in the story thread...ooops! :blush: I think I'll lock my WIPs so this doesn't happen to anyone else by mistake.

Anyway..I like writing dialogue (spoken or not) for Jimmy. He's a naturally funny person, particularly when he's not trying to be funny. 8-)

There won't be too much of a tie-in with the previous story, Colleen...I think. But that may change. It certainly "happened" in the universe of this story, because that's an easy was to tie Jimmy with Fornell.

Andi, no honestly, I didn't remember that part. I visited the Memorial in 2007 and loved it. It's really striking for a not-too-large space right in the middle of DC. I've always liked compass roses, and in brief memory-refreshing research of the site, I remembered that there is a noteable compass rose on the plaza. The title will tie in with the story, though. You'll see why Fornell is there soon.

Nat, I'm so glad you like it so far! I didn't know that about the diabetes either until I read that somewhere while researching this story. It's true: diabetes is a total disqualification from enlisting in the armed forces. Someone online was kept out of the service because of it and then applied for a special agent job with the FBI, and had to fight to get hired. (He eventually won.) My pleasure with the landmark. It will come into play a lot more in the story.

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Dun dun dun! I like how methodical all this is. They have a lot of facts...but no conclusions and no way of knowing if they'll actually get to the truth or if they're getting led around in circles. I like!

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Thanks! I hope to keep this down to not too many more chapters, but conclusions are something they'll have to come to eventually, maybe. Would it help if the missing O'Keefe were to turn up? :thinking:

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Oh, yes! I've been waiting to meet the Adonis. I haven't decided yet whether he's good or bad, but I'm hoping for Jimmy's sake that the clouds of suspicion around him will be mostly misunderstanding. Especially after that speech of Jimmy's where he said he didn't have many real friends. It would be tough for him to lose someone else he cares for (but we do know he can think better of people than they deserve, as he did with Lee).

This is fascinating, Pam! It's branching out in very interesting directions. The idea of sedition is really gripping (and quite credible in the current political situation), and when you link that up to the missing guns, it could get very dangerous, very fast.

I loved the scene in Fornell's office where Gibbs and Vance sit protectively on either side of Jimmy. I could picture that, and I was glad they were both there to defend him.

And it was fun to see Fornell in an adversarial role--but it's clear he doesn't really have a clue what's going on. He's just trying to do his job and keep the country safe.

The plot thickens!

Thank you so much-- I love this story!

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Wow; I like the way that you sum things up, Nat! That nicely shows what I was going for. It's true that Fornell is just doing his job, and this may cause him to lock horns with his NCIS counterparts. Sedition is a crime that I've been dying to use somewhere, and this story seemed like a good place for it. ;D

I hope I can continue to keep you interested!

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More problems, more subterfuge - Jimmy in strife, hopefully Gibbs and the team to the rescue, this is a super story Pam!! :clap:

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Thanks, Mad! We'll have to find out just what's in Jimmy's and Ellery's past...as well as their present.

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You've planted the seeds for a very interesting mystery, and with Palmer at the center. I like Jimmy better in your stories than I do on the show. :yes: And I like the little funny bits you add in, like Palmer thinking he was getting mugged. And "Sedition!" I'll probably be walking around shouting that in my head tonight. ;D

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I've been carrying that tune in my head for a week. ;D It's time for someone else to have it. :whistle:

I think Jimmy would be much more attractive on the show if only he got more airtime. He was wonderful on About Face, I thought: earnest, honest, intelligent, and yet just a bit offkilter. But I do enjoy writing him, and giving him humorous moments. :)

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I've been carrying that tune in my head for a week. ;D It's time for someone else to have it. :whistle:

I think Jimmy would be much more attractive on the show if only he got more airtime. He was wonderful on About Face, I thought: earnest, honest, intelligent, and yet just a bit offkilter. But I do enjoy writing him, and giving him humorous moments. :)


I agree with you about the airtime factor, Pam. Often when we see Jimmy, he's just brought in to be a punchline for the autopsy scene, but whenever he gets a little more screen time, we see a deeper side of Palmer that shows his intelligence and sensitivity--for example, in "Broken Bird," when he is trying so hard to solve the puzzle Ducky has set for him (about I and J Streets) as a way to show how much he cares for Ducky and how much he wants to live up to his expectations; or in "Last Man Standing" when he explains why he broke up with Lee. And he certainly showed us much more in "About Face."

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Yes, exactly. I do have a some Jimmy screencaps that show him concerned or worried or serious. I pull them out now and then to remind myself that he does indeed have a serious side. I do love him in those episodes that you named.

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At long last...a new chapter!

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Wow, that was a surprise. I didn't expect it go down like it did. I'm with Jimmy. Even though I didn't know what was going to happen, I didn't expect the explanation. Bravo!

How much more can we expect from this story?

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I don't know how much more. I don't think more than 2-3 chapters, but I'm not sure.

I admit, the turn of events wasn't quite what I was expecting, either, but I haven't told you everything yet. :haloslip:

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I didn't expect you to have. ;D I'll wait and see what comes next...

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:wow: This is fun! :wow:

I went back to the beginning and read the first two chapters again, so I would remember all the twists and turns when I got to the new addition. I love the way you are using Gibbs, Vance and Fornell with Jimmy, and the lovely supportive friendship Ducky shows him.

And thanks for taking the action back to the Navy Memorial, so the Lt. could be arrested there! Very cool. (And of course Jimmy would go to meet his friend. He's loyal. Even after Lee, he doesn't have trust issues.) :yay:

I loved the way Jimmy tried to bring his friend to his senses, too.

I keep remembering the line you gave Jimmy where he says he doesn't want to lose his friend because he doesn't have many. That's heart-wrenching, and it really puts me as a reader on Jimmy's side. People aren't disposable to Jimmy.

Very exciting chapter! And it raises really interesting issues; I'm glad Gibbs is protecting Jimmy and Vance is backing him up.

Thanks so much! I love this story!

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Good update, Pam! I am so glad Jimmy called Gibbs before he went to meet his friend. Looks like he's picked up a thing or two from hanging around with a good team! I like seeing Gibbs' concern for Jimmy's safety, too. Eager to see what happens next. I have a feeling this isn't over yet.

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I figured the story of "of course I won;t tell anyone" and thereby get into trouble had been done enough. I wanted to give Jimmy enough sense and trust in Gibbs to call him. Of course, Jimmy wasn't being personally threatened. He had nothing to lose...except for his best friend. :( That will weigh heavily on him.

But...there is more to come.

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Very eventful chapter! Poor Jimmy, though, is obviously stuck between wanting to help his friend and wanting to do the right thing. I'm sure that was hard for him. And from the looks of it, thing are only going to get harder...

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So, somehow this story has managed to hide from me in all the (short amount of) time I've been here at NFA. I love it! I hope you get inspired to keep working on it. I don't suppose a bribe of chocolate chip cookies would help...? ;D

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I need inspiration to finish it. If chocolate chip cookies will help, I'll gladly take them! :D

Actually, I'll take them anyway! Thank you! ;D

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