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Yes! First comment! ;D

Hmmm...interesting. I'm glad to follow wherever this ends up going. Sounds fascinating to start. I was never enamored of Keating, but I didn't find him at all objectionable (besides the fact that he's not Tim ;D ).

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I didn't like Keating, though I didn't hate him. I picture Tim as wanting to keep away from him as much as he can, so it's fun to throw them back into contact.

I'm making this up as I go along...Kelley has given me some directions, but I'll let them unfold rather than reveal them. :)

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Letting them unfold is great fun, and I'm excited to follow where you lead us. ;D

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Interesting start. The two are like oil and water, just don't mix well so it will be interesting to see what's going to happen. With Tony's snide comments to Tim, I hope he doesn't do anything too rash :evillaugh: because he's certainly pushing Tim's buttons right now

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Teri, I hope to throw in a few twists to keep the ride entertaining. :)

Carolyn, oil and water is a good comparison. They're really not much alike at all. Is Tony's snark excessive? Maybe...

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Great start! Keating is an interesting character, so I'm glad you returned to him. I'm curious to see where this goes, especially with the end of that chapter ;D Perhaps everything is not as it seems.

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Interesting! I loved Tony's and Ziva's attempts to get close to him (especially Keating's taste in movies). :lol2: Now is Keating the mole or is he being framed by someone like Johnstone? I can't wait for your next chapter!

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Keating, for all his social clumsiness at NCIS, does strike me as the type who perhaps has a harder time making friends becuase his interests are so narrow. (I personally have tried to appreciate dour, artsy films, with no luck. They're just not my thing. :P )

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I didn't exactly warm to Keating, I mean how dare he mess up Tim's stuff! That's a definite :no: :no: , but I can't really picture him as a bad guy, unless he's under duress....of course I'm hooked again, and waiting to see where you take us with this! ;D

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Thank you, Mad! I hope there are unexpected turns to come. :)

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How ironic! No one wants Tim to be the one to approach Keating, because of his obvious dislike. Yet, who does Keating actually reach out to? McGee! And I loved the line about Tony: "That left Tony, the chameleon, who could no more speak Geek than Greek, but who could charm a slide rule into becoming a calculator." :) That's such a perfect description of him!

Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Nice start Pam. Sounds like an interesting beginning. Ever since LMS, I have wondered if Keating stayed at NCIS. I know he went to Cybercrimes but I thought that was odd. Would someone stay with an agency that thought he was a mole. I wondered what he did to get on Vance's radar.

I could see McGee having a mild dislike for Keating since he changed everything.

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Some people, like perhaps Keating, may not really care what other people think of them, as long as they still get a paycheck. Keating might also genuinely like being at NCIS (in real life, it's considered one of the best agencies to work for). He may also be hampered in moving to another agency with this cloud of suspicion over him.

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Don't know this guy but it really hurt to see Tim feeling so insecure about his position and that he can't do the job right!

As far as I can understand I really like it!

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None of us really know Keating that well, as he didn't get much air time. (He was in Last Man Standing, the season 6 opener.) Tim continued to grumble after that about the mess Keating had left his desk in. So we're mostly free to invent things about him. :)

Thanks for being willing too read the story anyway! :)

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Oh NO!! Where's Tim and what did Keating do to him? I was convinced Keating was innocent, but now I'm having second thoughts; unless he's a victim of circumstance, too.

Great update, Pam! More, more!!

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I don't like Keating much, but I hope that he's not guilty. People who are full of themselves aren't necessarily evil. More!

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I want to believe Keating's innocent, but this does not look good. Or does it? I mean, we don't know that Keating was the one to ambush Tim. Maybe they're both being held by someone? Or maybe Keating is guilty and Ziva approaching him before the ballet gave them away. *sigh* I can't wait for the interview in the next chapter.

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Confusion! Good. My work here is done. ;D *slaps chalk dust off hands*

Shellie, that's the question: Where is Tim? Investigation is not always obvious, as we know.

Teri, I agree that people full of themselves aren't necessarily evil; not at all. (And Tony's hardly one to talk.) Even guilty people aren't necessarily evil. I've known several windbags who are otherwise good people and upstanding citizens. But does Keating really fall into any of those camps? 8-)

Andi, all I can say is...wait and see. ;D

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Interesting turn.....Keating speaking to Tim is a nice touch. Keating probably beleives Tim might be the one who would understand the situation. He seems more accessible than his teammates. I am interested to see what happen to Keating and of course McGee.

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Aha, and the plot thickens! So now both Keating and Tim are missing. Perhaps they've been abducted by someone who wants to exploit their computer capabilities :thinking:

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Kelley, you raise good points. In theory, at least, Keating and Tim should understand each other a bit more because of their shared geek interests. Maybe keating does think that Tim would have a sympathetic ear.

Colleen, I'm not saying much :-X :D We will have to see what's happened to them.

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Lots of lovely developments in this chapter...Keating’s conversation with Tim, and Tim’s concerns about what was said, and not said...the night at the ballet, well, not quite a night...more intrigue with the top secret file, and now Tim’s missing too... :shocked:

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Lots of possibilities, and the team will scratch their heads over this. Has Tim been kidnapped? Killed? Did he somehow not go into the stroe at all? And what about Keating? Nothing is obvious.

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Hmm... considering it's you... I'm going to feel secure in the idea that Tim's alive and ... well, alive, if not a little or a lot maimed! ;D

Count me as among those uncertain of Keating! He could've gone to Tim because they share the geek factor... or he could've gone to Tim because he had him pegged as the soft touch... hmm...

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They've all worked with Keating for at least 2 years, and they still don't know him well. It's easier when you can guess what someone might do...but when you can't guess that, things get tough.

I wouldn't maim Tim...maiming implies some permanence...but I might rough him up a bit. :evillaugh:

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Yippee!!! Interesting. Interesting. The thot plickens...even though it seemed to be wrapping up. I'm not sure if I should be expecting more or less. ;D ...but I'll take more!

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I am making this up as I go along. Literally! The direction of this chapter changed at least six times while I was writing it. ;D

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Well, whether Keating is innocent or not, you sure are making him unlikable.

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My true feelings are showing through? ;D

Actually, I am trying to project what I think are Tim's feelings onto this. Tim has not shown any liking of Keating; rather, just irritation. They may have like interests in computers, but Keating grates on Tim's nerves. (And I admit I did not like what we were shown of Keating on the show. He sounded arrogant and cold.)

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I barely remember him actually. I don't even recall his personality. He obviously made a huge impact on me. ;D

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Pam, you do make it to where you can't like Keating...When he called Tim a Navy Brat just made me hear the way he said it flash through my head. Very good job on making him unlikeable like Teri said...even though he might not be a bad guy. Poor Tim.

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I hope it isn't bothering you that I'm making Keating unlikeable, Kelley. :P

Whether he really is a bad guy, or just an obnoxious one, remains to be seen. :)

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No it doesn't bother. For some reason I don't think Tim would like him....well I know he was frustrated when Keating changed his shortcuts. It adds to the story.

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It's a natural assumption that because two people have some common interests, they're bound to become friends if they meet. However, we can all point to instances we know in which that hasn't happened. People are a lot more complicated than that.

If Tim and Keating really had to work together, on the same team, I think they'd wind up killing each other. ;)

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That is a good point Pam. I really don't think they have a lot in common. Tim doesn't seem like the normal geek that is protray because he has different hobbies than most. He does love his games but the paintball and the writing are different.
I always thought it was funny because Gibbs complained to Vance that Keating didn't drive.....when we first met Tim he wasn't driving either. I always laughed at that.

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I think the "doesn't drive" statement was an exaggeration, like saying that Michelle "doesn't shoot". Obviously neither would have made it through FLETC without being able to drive and shoot. :) (I had to go look it up in the transcripts. ;) ) Keating is probably lazy enough that he always talked someone else on the team into doing the driving.

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I'm kind of glad Keating wasn't in on it (or was he?) even if he's kind of a jerk. And nice to see Tim assume something of the hero role ;D

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Tim's always a hero, in my eyes. :smitten:

Keating's role is not yet over...

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How dare Keating call Tim a Navy brat!! Who does he think he is? Tim’s worth (at least) twenty of that wretched little cyber creep...oops, can you tell I didn’t much care for Keating? I don’t know why, but he struck me as the kind of person who would have a sweaty handshake....yuk! :P

Back on topic, excellent chapter, and Tim did some quick thinking, loved it! :D

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:bwah: Yes, Keating probably does have a sweaty handshake!

Tim did think quickly, although he may be in trouble now because of it...

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I'm still sitting on the fence with Keating. I can't tell if he's a good guy, or a bad guy! It could still be part of his plan to appear that he's a victim, tied up with Tim. It's possible I'm reading too much into it, of course. :) Good chapter, Pam. You're really moving the story along. I'm eager to read the next part and find out if Tim's been SHOT! and how his team will protect him.

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PostPosted: Sun May 16, 2010 4:00 pm 
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Thanks, Shellie! More will be revealed, soon... :evillaugh:

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New chapter! I think there's only one more to go. :)

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Wow. What a chapter...and what an arrogant jerk Keating is! I don't remember him being that bad when he was on the show, but I can accept that. Still...made me want to wring his scrawny (or not so scrawny) neck! :P

I'm very excited to see what happens next! Write more! More!

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